WARM UP: Editing

Read the selection titled Memories. When you are finished reading the passage answer the 4 editing questions that follow.

Memories

(1) I wanted to remember this extraordinary day forever. (2) I was actually at Disney World for the first time, but we forget our camera. (3) Suddenly I saw a flashing neon signe for a gift shop. (4) It was my lucky day. (5) Mom darted into the store and was buying a Canon PowerShot. (6) “Quick, Mom, please take pictures of me with some fo the Disney characters. (7) I see them standing over there. (8) “Hurry!” (9) Luckily my mom made the purchase and snapped the shots. (10) Click, click, click. (11) Now I can see the tip every day as I admire photographs of me on Mickey’s knee.